Logo critique / feedback please

[janmense]

Hey there,

i actually redesign my logo!

My name is jan mense and my name will allways be shown next to it!

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Please give me some feedback, thanks!

[janmense]

is janeleo spam?

[chrisburton]

Pretty awesome start and it looks great on that background!

I think this just needs a few minor tweaks. I would tighten the loop of the “j”, bring the horizontal stroke further down and keep the stem more vertical. With those changes you might even have to add a stem to what looks like an “n”.

The typeface used on “Design Studio” and “Janmense” doesn’t really compliment the custom script. I would try experimenting a little more with that.

I hope this helps!

[chrisburton]

@Schmotty Scribble? My feedback would result to @janmense having to re-loop the “j” completely and most likely have the “m” connect in another way. If you look at the curves of the “m” then, where the “j” connects to the “m”, that whole loop looks odd as it’s wider. That makes the “m” seem like an “n”.

[janmense]

Ok, i’ll try it.

Do you have a suggestion for the typeface ?

[chrisburton]

@janmense Hmm. You know, personally, all I would do is experiment. I would stay more on the modern side, though. That would certainly compliment the monogram.

Once you complete it, I can probably help you more with that.

On a side note – This thread inspired me to actually sketch my own version.

[janmense]

Hey there,

got another idea:
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or just like this:
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[janmense]

i really lke this one:

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[chrisburton]

Me too but it now looks like “in”

The bottom text won’t be legible if you need to scale it down a little.

[janmense]

@Schmotty ok, here it is with same typeface for the symbol an the name, but it’s not that good i think…

@ChristopherBurton this should look more like a ‘j’

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[chrisburton]

Nice, man. The other typeface looks a lot better with it, though.

Edit: Print Designer should be two words

[janmense]

not in germany ;-)

[janmense]

what about this typeface?

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[chrisburton]

That doesn’t work in my opinion.

Also, it seems you went in a completely different direction with your logo, why?

[janmense]

do you have a tip for me?

serif, sans-serif, slab-serif etc ?

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