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January 1, 2011 at 6:16 am #30530
I haven’t been using CSS too long but have built two webites in the last week to learn as good as possible.
I was wondering if someone might be able to give me some feedback on the most recent site.
Design is simple due to it being a portfilio site, but if you have any suggestions, I’m very open to crit.
http://www.nigeldunkley.comJanuary 1, 2011 at 7:47 am #68001rickylamerzMember
Hey Nigel Dunkley,
It’s not to bad! I like the menu. It works very well. Although me personally would like to see a different Font and I would lose that BG.
And I don’t know if it’s me but the audio doesn’t seem to be working. Try using embedded .swf players. I use’m often and they work pretty darn good.January 1, 2011 at 7:57 am #68020
Thanks a lot,
For some reason the audio takes around 8 seconds to load. Possibly because its uploaded to Dropbox and thats where it retrieves the file. The audio player I have is Jquery/SWF and works fine locally, but when I go through the server it takes time.
I agree about the font, but there are so few that I like!
Which SWF players do you use?
NJanuary 1, 2011 at 2:32 pm #67875
Alright fellas, thanks for the feedback. Have changed the BG for something less suggestive and a bit more minimal.
hope its better!?!January 1, 2011 at 3:25 pm #67881clokey2kParticipant
I would think about changing the text justification for the ‘Keep in Touch’ section. Having the text stretch is leaving large whitespace. Justify right maybe? or decrease the font size?
I am really liking any grey-scale site at the moment, so thumbs up for that from me!January 1, 2011 at 5:29 pm #67889
Thanks man, I’ll def change the 1st sidebar text
I was already having doubts about this.
:)January 2, 2011 at 12:31 am #67800CricketLaChicaMember
First of all, nice site! BUT, I am concerned about some inconsistencies on your copy. I know it has little to do with CSS, or this might not be what you’re asking feedback on, but I’m feeling a bit giddy about your headers.
On your homepage, for example, you have 3 different types of headers: “KEEP IN TOUCH”, “intro:”, and “Current Projects:” – one is ALL CAPS, another is small caps (with a colon), and another which is Title Case (with a colon again). Maybe you want to just choose one style and use that for all of your headings. :-)January 2, 2011 at 6:13 am #67805
Thanks for the crit.
I’ve changed the text as you suggested and also evened out the padding in the divs, so hopefully the two sidebars look a bit cleaner.
As far as the headers, I think you mean the jquery sliders on the image pages? If so, I agree theyre a bit too much, but I didn’t want the big gaping white hole!?! I think I was hoping noone would notice the cheapshot :)
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