it looks great, I like how you give us some feedback on who you are, the suite looks good
The verbage on the front page is weak. You mention website 3 times in the first sentence or two.
I would make that stronger, possibly have a friend who is good at descriptive/creative writing, help you reword it.
maybe change the background so it fades to black all around. at the moment, there is a faint line at the sides. also, change the colour of the header text to a lighter colour to make it really stand out.
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