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I agree with everyone else. Reduce it down to the least possible number of elements; simplify and condense.
I’m not a fan of any of the font choices so far, but I’m horrendously picky about fonts and don’t like many, anyway, so take that with a grain of salt. @chrisburton seems to be the resident typography expert, maybe if he sees this he’ll chime in.