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April 26, 2013 at 1:42 pm #44389
booruguru
ParticipantI’ve given my site a facelift and I would appreciate some feedback.
April 26, 2013 at 2:18 pm #133293chrisburton
ParticipantI would work on the spacing and the borders a bit more. Also, using Helvetica is quite boring. I’d opt for something with more characteristics and personality.
April 26, 2013 at 2:23 pm #133294booruguru
ParticipantYeah, Helvetica is boring but it works. Do you have any suggestions for an alternative font?
Also, could you elaborate on your border and spacing issues?
April 26, 2013 at 2:38 pm #133297chrisburton
ParticipantHere’s a quick edit of what I was referring to: http://cloud.chrisburton.me/Oaff/o
April 26, 2013 at 2:51 pm #133301booruguru
ParticipantHmm. You’re not quite seeing what I’m seeing.
FYI: Here are some screenshots of what the site looks like on my computer…
http://i.imgur.com/md1NGlD
http://i.imgur.com/oFeUMuHI’ll have to try to figure out why the page is wonky in other browsers. Would you mind telling me what OS and browser you are using?
I’m using Mac OS 10.5 and Firefox v20
April 26, 2013 at 3:02 pm #133304chrisburton
ParticipantI purposely edited it as stated above.
In the image above (and below) are the improvements I would have made to the site. However, I don’t have much time to fiddle with it further.
April 26, 2013 at 3:09 pm #133306mattrossi
Memberfor what it is worth, i think chrisburton’s version/tweaks look more refined and easier to read.
April 26, 2013 at 3:27 pm #133307booruguru
Participant> In the image above (and below) are the improvements I would have made to the site. However, I don’t have much time to fiddle with it further.
Okay, wait a sec. In the image above and below? I’m only seeing one pic and it’s what I assumed to be a screenshot of my site as it appears now (on your computer).
April 26, 2013 at 3:31 pm #133308chrisburton
ParticipantCorrect. There is only one image. I re-pasted the link so you didn’t have to scroll up.
The image itself is a screenshot of the improvements that I personally made.
+ Yours: http://cloud.chrisburton.me/Oa1g/o
+ Mine: http://cloud.chrisburton.me/Oaff/oI hope that clears things up.
April 26, 2013 at 3:37 pm #133309booruguru
Participant> I hope that clears things up.
It does. Thanks. Also what fonts did you use? I’m assuming Georgia for the article titles, but I can’t identify the other one used for the article excerpts and sidebar items.
April 26, 2013 at 3:45 pm #133311chrisburton
ParticipantNope. Georgia is a transitional serif and I’m using a slab serif.
+ Headings: Adelle Semibold
+ Site title and body copy: Open SansIf you have a budget to work with, I could suggest better alternatives.
Keep in mind, there are still some inconsistencies with my version. However, I think you understand where I was going with it.
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