Re: How I’m doing so far?

[Chris Coyier]

Hey John,

I think it looks great! Nice work. I think there are some simple tweaks that could help… You already saw the slight cut-short on the shadow, that would be nice to see end more smoothly. I could even see shadow being night quite so large and taking on a bit yellow-er and deeper tone. The text in the footer could get kicked over a little bit so it fits inside the yellow bar. Also not sure if I like the "hair-comb" effect in the footer, maybe some more drips or dots from elsewhere in the design. Lastly, not sure if the removal of the knockouts in the letters of the logo is a good idea. Makes it a bit harder to read. All little nitpicky stuff — just trying to be helpful!