PS Mock Up Feedback

[gmox]

Hey guys,

I’ve got my 1st sorta pro job, it’s just a trade for some work. None the less, I’d like to do a good job as I learn something new. 1st step, the mock ups. I’m not crazy about what I’ve come up with and was hoping to get some feedback. Any thoughts as to what needs to be improved?

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/52/pgmock01.jpg/

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/543/pgmock02.jpg/

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/683/pgmock03.jpg/

Thanks!

[akurtula]

I like the first design (better than the other 2): it is simple.

I would take the mounting logo to the right, the title to the left
remove the “providing quality windows ..” from the banner and add it on top of the windows image (as a caption)
maybe give a background color to “Quality matters” similar to the “precision craftmanship” in mockup 2.
The address and contact information does not have to be that big; give them all a heading like address:… Phone: … and change the font (make it smaller and different color) off these headings

[TheDoc]

I like the header of #1 and the footer in #2.

[mshort1985]

I like the header and colours in #3 but the nav bar in #1 :)

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