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  • #33173
    grimslayer
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    Hi,

    I would like you to take a look at my design and critique it please.

    Things to take note of

    1. This is my first concept
    2. The logo is made quickly and not positioned on the page properly or has not been finished
    3. The Image of the man is a stock image at the moment looking to purchase when client agrees on design

    You can find the design here: http://johnathangrimes.hostei.com/clients/greengrass/
    it is only an image at the moment.

    Thanks in advance

    #72594
    akurtula
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    i like it

    the only thing I would suggest is to but the navigation a bit lower

    also maybe use only one border on your stock images. at the moment you have the gray and the black; maybe remove the black border

    #72572
    grimslayer
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    Thanks akurtula and fordinary for commenting. I have tried it without the black border, and I have also moved the nav down inline with the logo, looks a lot better with these alteration, thnx.

    More comments welcome . . . .

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