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  • # April 24, 2009 at 9:34 am

    Hey, a couple of weeks ago, I made the post here to have you all critique my site. One of you gave me a ling to some professional templates, and I took your advice on structure. This is what I’ve come up with so far. Not all of the content is in, but it’s taken about a week and a half not working on it more than maybe an hour a day.

    Link to my new site design

    Please let me know what you think.

    # April 24, 2009 at 10:46 am

    i would change the paragraph text to a sans-serif font, such as Lucida Sans or Arial, makes it a little easier to read.

    dont really have much else to criticise

    # April 24, 2009 at 11:38 am

    Site seemed to time out. I’ll check back later.

    # April 27, 2009 at 1:15 am

    hi friend,

    your work is appreciated but i m not happy with ur design…u jst design the site on basic criteria just try to make your site little different from others this is what i think …try to make it little sleek just try some other fontstyle and play with some images to make it a bit interested…

    # April 27, 2009 at 2:33 am

    Hey Nathan,

    I like the first impression a lot. The large tabs, colors, and slight fades are very easy on the eyes.

    The headings are great, but I agree with chazzwick about a san-serif font for the paragraphs and body copy.

    I think there is something missing though. I think it’s just a little tweaking in the type-face/content layout. I think the links/icons on the bottom right are a little overpowering.

    That’s all I got today ;)
    Ashton Sanders

    Edit: Oh yea, and wtf is up with this ridiculous file name: … B8252.html
    haha Is that an inside joke, or something?

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