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Hey, a couple of weeks ago, I made the post here to have you all critique my site. One of you gave me a ling to some professional templates, and I took your advice on structure. This is what I’ve come up with so far. Not all of the content is in, but it’s taken about a week and a half not working on it more than maybe an hour a day.
Please let me know what you think.
i would change the paragraph text to a sans-serif font, such as Lucida Sans or Arial, makes it a little easier to read.
dont really have much else to criticise
Site seemed to time out. I’ll check back later.
hi friend,
your work is appreciated but i m not happy with ur design…u jst design the site on basic criteria just try to make your site little different from others this is what i think …try to make it little sleek just try some other fontstyle and play with some images to make it a bit interested…
Hey Nathan,
I like the first impression a lot. The large tabs, colors, and slight fades are very easy on the eyes.
The headings are great, but I agree with chazzwick about a san-serif font for the paragraphs and body copy.
I think there is something missing though. I think it’s just a little tweaking in the type-face/content layout. I think the links/icons on the bottom right are a little overpowering.
That’s all I got today ;)
Ashton Sanders
Edit: Oh yea, and wtf is up with this ridiculous file name:
http://www.phyer.com/nathanlane/staging … B8252.html
haha Is that an inside joke, or something?