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August 31, 2012 at 6:46 am #39593janmenseParticipantAugust 31, 2012 at 11:36 am #108823BillyParticipant
Very nice Jan!
I don’t exactly understand the sunglasses at the top though.August 31, 2012 at 12:18 pm #108826Paulie_DMemberBecause sunglasses make you look cool…right?
:)
Oh….and just pick a logo already! :)
August 31, 2012 at 8:25 pm #108833joshuanhibbertMemberI personally prefer the simpler options you created a while back. This one seems like there is too much going on, and I’m not sure how well it would render at smaller sizes.
September 3, 2012 at 3:53 am #108966janmenseParticipantthats my eyeglasses, no sunglasses :)
@joshuanhibbert my new website will be designed in the same style and i’ll never use it smaller than on a business card so i think it’s ok!thanks for your feedback!
September 21, 2012 at 7:55 am #110497janmenseParticipantSeptember 21, 2012 at 10:11 am #110401Watson90MemberI like that one ^
Very clean, and quite clever the way you have created it.
I suck when it comes to re-branding or logo design.
September 21, 2012 at 10:35 am #110504djrolstadParticipantThe latest one you posted is AWESOME!
September 22, 2012 at 12:10 am #110551joshuanhibbertMemberThe latest version is quite good. Might need some slight tweaking, but that’s the one I would go with!
September 26, 2012 at 5:30 am #110804janmenseParticipant@joshuanhibbert what exactly should be tweaked?
September 26, 2012 at 5:53 am #110805joshuanhibbertMemberSorry, I should have elaborated further in my original comment. Some of the things I would recommend playing with:
- • Matching the widths of the outside border, the white area, and the separation that creates the ‘J’.
- • Fixing the radius of the curves in the ‘M’, they feel quite unnatural at the moment.
- • Increasing the size of your name next to the logo.
September 26, 2012 at 11:27 am #110823chrisburtonParticipantI’m going to be quite honest here in a constructive way. If you remove the type from your latest design approach, that mark is illegible to view as “JM” by itself. Looking at your [past work](http://www.janmense.de/arbeiten/printmedien/visitenkarten-jan-mense.html), I think you have the potential to do much better. It seems some of what you’re presenting here looks rushed or not well thought out. Have you been sketching out ideas before implementing them in Illustrator? If not, I strongly advise to do so.
.Examples of great logo marks:
General Electric (GE) by Doyald Young
GP by Ged Palmer.
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