feedback on this design please

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don’t be afraid to be brutal. I am looking for honest critiques. thanks.

this is just a picture. I plan on having the top part of the header ( the black bar ) stretch all the way across the browser.
http://www.wilsonwrites.com/mockup/

[ikthius]

size is too big, it is centred for a large monitor, not a res of 1024×768.

the blue is a bit bright and could be sore to read, I would tone it down a bit.

I dont like the blue titles on the black background, I think your blue nav bar should have a bit of room, and not that bright blue

I would have more space between the bottom of posts and the footer.

Have a good image for the wilson writes, like a good script font

your home blog etc should have more space, or highlight a break in-between with a pipe |

just my thoughts though

[tomwalters5678]

Yeah I agree with the above – it is too big – the max width of any page should be around 900px to accommodate low res displays. Also I think the bright blue is a tad over-powering so I would tone that down.

Apart from that it is a nice site.

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