• # May 3, 2008 at 8:07 am

    ok, be kind :)
    Tell me what you think.

    # May 3, 2008 at 8:47 am

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    Nice original design. Maybe some dark colors somewhere, the white-background with the bege-forground are both very light.. for the rest, nice I think.

    # May 4, 2008 at 1:21 am

    I would lower the opacity on the type in the background.
    less is more and subtleties really send good design into great design and right now i feel the type in the back is fighting for attention to much and sometimes winning when the visitor should be focused more on the content of your site.

    other than that,

    i dig. its not "2.0" and that gets a big thumbs up from me :)

    # May 4, 2008 at 3:11 am

    Thanks! Will do that with the type in the background.

    # May 4, 2008 at 10:35 am

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    I also like the handwritten type stuff in the background, but it’s kind of a "tweener" stage right now. I think making even more of it but then lowering the intensity of it would be cool. Then it becomes more of a texture, which is really cool. Right now my eye wants to go read that stuff, which is distracting and pulls away from your main content.

    # May 5, 2008 at 3:13 am

    Thank you all for giving constructive advice. Must say, I’ve posted also in other forums and this is the only one that offered some practical advice. I think I’ll be posting here more often. Thanks!

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