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  • May 7, 2011 at 2:13 am #32625
    Waffle
    Member

    http://coadin-internet.com/

    Content isnt done yet but i’d like some helpful critisism :D

    May 7, 2011 at 2:27 am #46719
    chrisburton
    Participant

    I usually don’t express my input on feedback questions like this but a few things to consider:

    1. You have invalid markup here

    2. Your background image needs to be condensed in file size and re-evaluated since you can tell where it repeats.

    3. Either use sprites for your nav buttons or (in my opinion) use CSS to create it.

    4. Why are you using tables when that is not what tables are for?

    May 7, 2011 at 2:31 am #46720
    rallred84
    Member

    I like it. Very simple, very clean. Like that you can reach everything from the one page.

    My only criticism has to do with the wording of your content (which you have already indicated isn’t complete, so this may be a moot point)

    “Coadin Internet provides an array of services, from Web Design to Logo design, we make sure that our clients are happy with their design.

    Website Design
    Logo Design
    Design to Code “

    It is very repetitive with the use of the same word “design” three times in one sentence, and then again three times in the bullet points.

    Maybe something like this would be better:

    “Coadin Internet provides an array of services, ranging from Web Design to custom logo creation. In addition to offering websites that are both visually stunning and easy to navigate, we also ensure that all of our websites are designed to meet the most up to date code so that every user, no matter what computer system they are running, gets the same great experience. Most importantly, we make sure that our clients are happy with their design.” (or something like that)

    There is really no need for the bullet points because they were saying the same thing that you already said in the paragraph without really adding anything else.

    But this stuff probably isn’t why you posted this on here. Your DESIGN (there’s that word again) was very nice in my opinion. Good stuff!

    May 7, 2011 at 2:37 am #46686
    Waffle
    Member

    Thank you very much both of you.
    @ChristopherBurton

    Thanks! I have looked at the W3C stuff and corrected a lot of the mistakes.
    Also
    @Rallred! good critisism! thanks. I will change that :D

    May 7, 2011 at 2:45 am #46680
    chrisburton
    Participant

    Take value out

    Your list items need to be inside an unordered list

  • example: 


      

    • Whatever

      • 

    • etc

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    May 7, 2011 at 2:50 am #46681
    Waffle
    Member

    @ChristopherBurton

    I cannot take the value out, You cannot see from just viewing source code but
    I have some php inside the value

    May 7, 2011 at 2:54 am #46653
    chrisburton
    Participant

    The value attribute is an invalid attribute of textarea.

    Also replace your head with this: 


    

    
Coadin Internet | Web Designers
    May 7, 2011 at 3:55 am #46642
    Waffle
    Member

    Changed my Head. …

    And I’d have to redo my whole PHP form. :/

    May 7, 2011 at 4:10 am #46639
    chrisburton
    Participant

    Your markup needs to be valid and that should be a main focus. I’m confused as to why you deleted everything?

    May 7, 2011 at 7:41 am #46626
    Waffle
    Member

    Deleted everything no. :/ FTP Error, uploaded everything else by accident and now ive lost my cpanel passwords, trying to sort it.

    May 7, 2011 at 8:02 am #46606
    Waffle
    Member

    Its all been put back now :D.

    May 7, 2011 at 10:05 am #46609
    Waffle
    Member

    My background is fine, I redid it, Its fine. its suppose to be like that, thats the pattern.

    How can i possibly make those exact buttons with css, those are buttons I made with photoshop. It wouldnt look as good.

    May 7, 2011 at 11:14 am #46598
    Arvid
    Member

    https://css-tricks.com/examples/ButtonMaker/

    May 7, 2011 at 11:36 am #46587
    Arvid
    Member

    Of course, I realise that the button maker’s not perfect for all situations so I made a css3 button looking a lot like yours, now you can just customize it to your needs, not so many changes should be needed.


    

    

    

    
Button using CSS3
    

    

    

    

    

    
Contact

    You can also use box-shadow for the drop shadow.

    May 7, 2011 at 1:49 pm #77313
    Waffle
    Member

    Aye I appreciate the suggestion, but Border radius doesn’t work in most browsers…

    Images do.

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