Re: Website mockup – would love some serious critique

[gno]

I have to disagree with Coffeendonut on the missing “fun factor”. When you dish out so much information on one single page, the single most important thing is structure. And so far, Spearfrost got that right. Adding too much extra “fun” might just screw up the structure and make it confusing for the visitor.

My advice would be to focus on sleekness and polishing – and keeping it simple.

Save all your funny effects until you are creating a page with less concentration of content :-)