Re: design critique and help

[davidlab.be]

Not bad if it’s your first and like you said you are just starting out so you will improve your skill set in time. Best thing you can do to learn style is to really watch trends in web design.
If I was you… really focus on responsive web design. Responsive web is here to stay and it is going to be the standard soon. Mobile sites are a must!
Good luck and keep pushing forward.