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rallred84
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I like it. Very simple, very clean. Like that you can reach everything from the one page.

My only criticism has to do with the wording of your content (which you have already indicated isn’t complete, so this may be a moot point)

“Coadin Internet provides an array of services, from Web Design to Logo design, we make sure that our clients are happy with their design.

Website Design
Logo Design
Design to Code “

It is very repetitive with the use of the same word “design” three times in one sentence, and then again three times in the bullet points.

Maybe something like this would be better:

“Coadin Internet provides an array of services, ranging from Web Design to custom logo creation. In addition to offering websites that are both visually stunning and easy to navigate, we also ensure that all of our websites are designed to meet the most up to date code so that every user, no matter what computer system they are running, gets the same great experience. Most importantly, we make sure that our clients are happy with their design.” (or something like that)

There is really no need for the bullet points because they were saying the same thing that you already said in the paragraph without really adding anything else.

But this stuff probably isn’t why you posted this on here. Your DESIGN (there’s that word again) was very nice in my opinion. Good stuff!