I don’t like the way the top menu behaves. I don’t like how the nav icon (as a personal quirk, I hate rounded corner icons because they look like hamburgers) feels like it’s just been shoved anywhere. I kind of want it to have a background or something?
There’s something about the imagery of a firearm that I don’t like. It’s a very aggressive and threatening symbol, and I would be very worried about the impression it sends. Yeah, the way it animates is cool and shows off your talent, but it’s also somewhat threatening.
It’s a bit heavy on words. Have a go at rewriting for brevity.
I like the way the email paper plane thing behaves, that’s really cool.