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  • December 5, 2008 at 6:37 pm #23710
    Yosry
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    Hello everyone ..
    i have been creat and coding my portfolio ..
    its my first step in CSS and XHTML technology ..

    http://www.yosry.ws

    any feedback for me ?
    thanks ..

    December 5, 2008 at 8:13 pm #52026
    Yosry
    Member

    Robskiwarrior..
    you alright ..
    thanks ..

    December 9, 2008 at 10:22 am #51926
    lotusflower007
    Member

    it looks great, I like how you give us some feedback on who you are, the suite looks good
    The verbage on the front page is weak. You mention website 3 times in the first sentence or two.
    I would make that stronger, possibly have a friend who is good at descriptive/creative writing, help you reword it.

    December 10, 2008 at 10:58 am #52039
    chazzwick
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    maybe change the background so it fades to black all around. at the moment, there is a faint line at the sides. also, change the colour of the header text to a lighter colour to make it really stand out.

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