The people in this forum have been a HUGE help and very generous with their critiques. Very happy to have some spend their valuable time to look at this site:
And I’ll take any and all criticisms, my biggest concern is it doesn’t look great on all resolutions and I don’t know how to fix that., but I’m open to all comments or suggestions.
Still not happy about that ‘Surf’ hover thing.
Frankly, it’s just frakkin’ annoying.
If it’s a site for a restaurant then I really don’t care about the surf conditions unless they are going to impact my dining experience….and does it need to be on every…damn….page?
I’m not a great fan of the menu hover states…it’s just a little ‘in my face’ going from the yellowish color to black. A deeper ‘yellow’ might be better.
On the ‘Locations’ page the directions links need to be easier to see in their ‘unhovered’ state. Also. although a link to Gmaps is nice, it’s not **giving me directions** which is what the links said it would.
On the ‘Gives’ page…I hate scrolling internal divs…just let the wrapper expand.
‘Menu’ page…why are you taking me to Facebook? Just add extra pages.
OK…I’ve ranted enough, I don’t want to come off as overly negative…overall I like the design but the UX/UI is not to my liking.
For the surf thing…is it a mandatory part of the site? If so, make the label a bit more clear as to what it is (“surf” is kind of vague) and make it a click event instead of hover.
For the menu items, I agree with @Paulie_D. Same with the scrolling internal divs.
As for making it fit across multiple resolutions – what exactly is the problem?
>As for making it fit across multiple resolutions – what exactly is the problem?
He has a #page-wrap div that is set to a width of 1072px and there are no media queries.
He’s basically stuck with desktop and tablet/landscape.
Fixing it is a **whole** other issue.
So the surf flag – it’s intended to be a novelty feature of the site , not for any real purpose. Just something the owner saw on another site and wanted something simliar for his. SO I hear ya, but the owner wants it to stay for now. It’s supposed to be a surf report, but more the word “Surf” was to just say “Surf” as in go surf.
The Gives Page (thanks I didn’t notice that scrolling and will fix that for sure)
THe Links color, I agree. But again the owner wanted them to be “Hyperlink” blue.
The width or resolution issue is at full screen on a high res monitor the site looks like it’s intended, but on a small laptop the main content get’s too big. (Yeah it’s not responsive or in any way really mobile friendly” Yet)
With linking to Facebook (again the owner wanted to keep the audience on Facebook as much as possible) , and I agree PDF’s are not fun. However it would take another few weeks to convert all the menus to something that would work on the web , I would think. Are there ways to publish a menu (Created in Adobe InDesign) that would meet the goals of web friendly ?
>Are there ways to publish a menu (Created in Adobe InDesign) that would meet the goals of web friendly ?
I have very little experience with InD but I was under the impression it could export to a number of formats including HTML but what the output would look like I do not know.
Thanks @Chrisburton , I agree the font isn’t complimenting to the Futura. The Challenge is that all their other collateral (menus, merchandise, etc) are using the Rosewood-Fill and Futura combo and they wanted the site to match…
@Paulie_D thanks that link helps. The Export didn’t exactly do what I was wishing, but it does give me some ideas. Is the aversion to PDF’s because not all browsers easily support them, and that they are not efficient, or SEO friendly ?
As for the flag, yes I’ve been wanting to do that with making the event trigger just with the flag. The image I use is a 200px or so wide image with the majority of the flag-”image” being transparent pixels to get it to line up where I wanted. I’ll play with the image and see if I can that to work easily.
As for the “Surf” Flag Tab, I don’t think it’s too awful. I don’t think it’s relevant to the site, but in a way it does add something ‘extra’ to it. As for the site’s navigation, I would definitely change the hover effect. The inset effect is not attractive at all. Also, if you have to have the shadow effect on the text, I wouldn’t go as far as ‘black’. Try finding a mid range color between the blue background and black, you don’t want the shadow to look too unnatural.
As previously mentioned, the resolution is definitely not “web standard” try sticking to a 960 Grid. Height-wise, you want to stay under 600px for important content. This is just a standard rule for usability design.
Another thing that I noticed that had come up already is the menu, or the lack there of. The point of having a website is to attract and keep people on the website. Facebook is not a site, it is a Social Media tool. They are two separate entities and should be treated as such. I can understand that the Client may want to drive traffic to the Facebook page, but that is not the way to do it and it’s kind of @ss backwards to do so anyways. The point of social media is to drive traffic to the website, not the other way around.
However, in this case, we are talking about a restaurant, so the bounce rate is going to be much higher than a typical website, just because people typically only visit these niche sites to see what they want before going to the location, to find the location, or to order something.
Back to the ‘social media’ aspect of the business though, to drive traffic to the Facebook page, this is where businesses typically add incentives such as coupons, or daily specials, etc. So if redirecting the end-users to the Facebook page is so important to the owner, then on the site it would be best practice to have an actual menu and then have a ‘call-for-action’ that says something like “For Daily Specials and Special Promotions, Check Out Our Facebook Page!”
Back to the layout, Why is the Navigation and Content Area so far apart? There’s atleast 150-200px space there. This could be improved. Make the content section wider, bring down the size of the logo some. Also the navigation doesn’t need to be so large.
I noticed that you had said something to the fact that this site is not responsive, yet. The current state of this website does not allow for responsiveness now or later. You can make a few different versions of it through the use of jquery and css, but in terms of “responsive layout design”, everything on this site is static. Nothing is fluid. It would be best to get away from the fixed layout and move to something more fluid and resolution standard (960×600). When I say 600, I am talking about primary content. It’s quite fine to have things below the fold, but always keep the important stuff within the 600px safe zone.
I want to ensure that I in no way mean any of what I said to be taken as disrespectful, only helpful. This is the whole point of a critique, to help you develop/ progress as a designer… I look forward to the changes, if any…
Guys, you do realize all this mean more work! lol jk
I agree, pdf as a download but not the actual content to the site. Convert them to some snazzy html and your golden.
However, I don’t see an issue with the menu being download only. Especially if the client has a budget of $1.
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