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    ninjacd
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    Hey, guys I have a ruff draft for a book website ” I Slept In A Pineapple A Guide to Historic Vacation Rentals in the United Kingdom and Ireland”

    It’s just the lay out client wants to provide the text. So let me know what you think.

    thanks a bunch Jon

    http://randy.jonmackay.com

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    Mr Bean
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    Hi Jon,

    I think you did well but it still needs quite some polishing.
    – The text Rand Rasoul isn’very readable, without shadow and tranparency it wil look better.
    – Mouseover on images is a bit slow, images aren’t sharp when zoomed in, whole page get longer with moveover
    – Mouseover on menu feels like, “he look what I can do” It doesn’t add anything and isn’t anything near subtile
    – background and border aren’t that well, maybe a bit boring or outdated
    – footer content side by side wouldn’t be bad too
    – for colors please make a colorsheme first, the blue and darkred don’t match

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