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I would like to get some feedback on this mock-up

  • I am doing this for a bed and breakfast in my area, they have no logo but have branded themselves with the sun deal in the header.

    It is not done but I would still like to hear your thoughts.
  • [edit]Only wanted to post that out of humor, realized I should probably remove it haha.[/edit]
  • Thats funny and scary at the same time, almost the same header image.
  • I would suggest trying to work some darker colors into the mockup, and perhaps using a background color other than white. At the moment, it feels a bit hard on the eyes -- the yellow and greens chosen seem a bit bright. Then again, maybe it won't be quite as bad when text is in place.
  • Huh. Both of you must have used the same stock image for the grass/flowers/sun. Just noticed that the flowers/grass from the new design is the same as the flowers/grass in the footer of TheDoc's site. One of the downsides of using a stock image...
  • "falkencreative" said:
    Huh. Both of you must have used the same stock image for the grass/flowers/sun. Just noticed that the flowers/grass from the new design is the same as the flowers/grass in the footer of TheDoc's site. One of the downsides of using a stock image...

    One of the downsides of a tight budget, really. Client needed it fast and cheap, stock options allow for that unfortunately.
  • Thanks falkencreative I will take that into consideration and maybe post something new.
  • Agreed...another option is to just try and create it yourself...no better way to stress those illustrator skills to the limit! :mrgreen:
  • I think its cute :)

    It wouldnt be hard to recreate that in illustrator...
  • I like it, however I would change the font on the navigational bar, something simpler, Serif/Sans-Serif - just makes it simpler, and keeps things looking smooth ;)