@JanMense Why don't you design something that you like and not what everyone else prefers? With saying that, as another designer's point of view, I think what you initially created seemed very minimal. In the sense that you weren't giving much of an effort. It comes off like you're just making random things and wanting people to tell you if it's good enough, as if you're questioning your own ability.
got another "idea", do you see the "j" and "m" ?
Watch this!
had to create a new one:
Click me
what do you say?
I still like this one.
Here is a piece of inspiration that John Passafiume had lettered and made into a typeface. It's something close to what you're trying to do.
So finally i'll use this!
A logo with negative space, thats what i originally wanted!
thanks all for your feedback!
i think this one looks more like a 'J' right?